Post by casey on Dec 7, 2014 20:52:08 GMT
I have a youtube channel (breyer awesomeness) and I have been planning a new breyer series for a while called unbreakable, I am currently writing it into a book and then adapting it into a "movie".
This is the basic plan, I'd love to know what people think of the basic idea :3 (I copied and pasted straight from my notes so if parts don't make sense that's why) it's kind of a mix of every movie I've seen in my life...
Storyline-
Ep 1- intro, Rimrock in his herd (flashback), humans arrive and capture loads of horses- some killed. Almost catch him but he escapes. Dramatic end (short ep)
Ep 2- Rimrock makes his way in the wild and meets a herd. They take him to the leader. He is accepted, finds another herd when out walking then speaks to them. The herd finds him and calls him a spy, he is banished from the area.
Ep 3- finds shelter alone, it becomes winter and he finds it hard to survive on his own. He blacks out. He wakes up in a small stall, he hears a voice far away. He gets up and starts panicking. A girl comes to him and calms him down. He is too afraid of humans, nobody can get near him without getting hurt. One night the girl comes and sets him free, he is reluctant to leave- thanks her and runs away.
Ep 4- he walks around, living normally. Finds a very small herd, leads them. *1 year later, autumn* they meet the herd from ep 2 that banished him. They recognise Rimrock and they argue. They fight, Rimrock is knocked down and remembers everything that happened in his life. Flashback to foal life, his mother being killed by hunters, Ella, the girl who freed him and TBC...
Ep 5- flash back to other episode. Shows horses gasping as raven stands supposedly victorious, Rimrock gets up. "I have lost everything, I'm not losing my life to you"
They fight, Rimrock wins etc.
he owns herd, one winter they see Ellie...
Ep 6- he goes with Ellie, says goodbye to herd (very emotional)
*1 year later*
Show Rimrock being ridden and all of the herd in stables. They are all owned by Ella, happy ending.
Rimrock meets raven in a dream, *long conversation about how he summoned him in a dream*
"Am I doing well?"
"With what?"
"Your herd?"
"It was your herd all along, you've done a better job than I would have ever done. I was a cruel leader."
Silence...
"I never wanted to kill you, you didn't deserve it"
"I did... Anyway the past is in the past." [let it go, let it gooooo]
"I should probably get back"
"Yup."
"Thank you, for everything"
[nods]
Wakes up, everyone is in a crowd- wish had given birth to a foal- he named him Raven. Everyone was surprised. He looks up and says "for you"
THE END
This is the basic plan, I'd love to know what people think of the basic idea :3 (I copied and pasted straight from my notes so if parts don't make sense that's why) it's kind of a mix of every movie I've seen in my life...
Storyline-
Ep 1- intro, Rimrock in his herd (flashback), humans arrive and capture loads of horses- some killed. Almost catch him but he escapes. Dramatic end (short ep)
Ep 2- Rimrock makes his way in the wild and meets a herd. They take him to the leader. He is accepted, finds another herd when out walking then speaks to them. The herd finds him and calls him a spy, he is banished from the area.
Ep 3- finds shelter alone, it becomes winter and he finds it hard to survive on his own. He blacks out. He wakes up in a small stall, he hears a voice far away. He gets up and starts panicking. A girl comes to him and calms him down. He is too afraid of humans, nobody can get near him without getting hurt. One night the girl comes and sets him free, he is reluctant to leave- thanks her and runs away.
Ep 4- he walks around, living normally. Finds a very small herd, leads them. *1 year later, autumn* they meet the herd from ep 2 that banished him. They recognise Rimrock and they argue. They fight, Rimrock is knocked down and remembers everything that happened in his life. Flashback to foal life, his mother being killed by hunters, Ella, the girl who freed him and TBC...
Ep 5- flash back to other episode. Shows horses gasping as raven stands supposedly victorious, Rimrock gets up. "I have lost everything, I'm not losing my life to you"
They fight, Rimrock wins etc.
he owns herd, one winter they see Ellie...
Ep 6- he goes with Ellie, says goodbye to herd (very emotional)
*1 year later*
Show Rimrock being ridden and all of the herd in stables. They are all owned by Ella, happy ending.
Rimrock meets raven in a dream, *long conversation about how he summoned him in a dream*
"Am I doing well?"
"With what?"
"Your herd?"
"It was your herd all along, you've done a better job than I would have ever done. I was a cruel leader."
Silence...
"I never wanted to kill you, you didn't deserve it"
"I did... Anyway the past is in the past." [let it go, let it gooooo]
"I should probably get back"
"Yup."
"Thank you, for everything"
[nods]
Wakes up, everyone is in a crowd- wish had given birth to a foal- he named him Raven. Everyone was surprised. He looks up and says "for you"
THE END